I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 4 and my teacher is Mrs Stone.
Hi Pauline,It's so great to see you adding more depth to your review - fabulous! You did a wonderful job of the summary in that you explained the main events without giving away the ending. Next time lets give it a score out of five and critique it further.
Hi Pauline,
ReplyDeleteIt's so great to see you adding more depth to your review - fabulous! You did a wonderful job of the summary in that you explained the main events without giving away the ending. Next time lets give it a score out of five and critique it further.