I really like the way you considered who would like to read the text in your review - I am now curious as to whether Witi Ihimaera would have read this text before! Next time you could add a little more detail to your answers, but I know we were rushed for time this session!
Hi Pauline,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you considered who would like to read the text in your review - I am now curious as to whether Witi Ihimaera would have read this text before! Next time you could add a little more detail to your answers, but I know we were rushed for time this session!
Thank you Ms. Stone for your feed back and feed forward. I would make sure to add more detail next time.
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