- School is a very busy and noisy place to learn.
- The classrooms is filled with chatter and laughter as students learn and play together.
- When you are completing a test, you can hear the pencils scraping as hard as nails on top of the brown wooden desks.
- When you play on the soft green field, you can feel the nice chilly wind on your skin.
- When you go outside to play, you can smell the fresh air coming in through your nose.
Learning Intention: We are learning to write a description.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write five descriptive sentences to describe a school and record it using Screencastify.
Hi there Pauline, my name is Billy and I am from the Summer Learning Journey. I have been so impressed reading this descriptive writing of yours. A big well done to you!
ReplyDeleteI love the language and similes you have used. You are a very talented writer. Keep it up!
Hopefully blog with you soon!
Thanks, Billy
Kia ora Pauline my name is Quin from Kawakawa primary school I really
ReplyDeletelike your piece of writing. Keep up the good work.