Kai Ora, My name is Maddiosn I am a year 7 student and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
I think that this is such a good idea for others to try and pint point key things in the picture and explain why you think that. It is pretty cool to see some of you work and how you completed it. I also really liked the way you have shared it.
I think that even thought this is absolutely amazing there is something that you need to improve of i really want you to try and write more above you blogs explaining the challenges and what you liked. Try to go into more detail about what this is and why. Try asking for feedback and what on.
Kai Ora,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddiosn I am a year 7 student and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
I think that this is such a good idea for others to try and pint point key things in the picture and explain why you think that. It is pretty cool to see some of you work and how you completed it. I also really liked the way you have shared it.
I think that even thought this is absolutely amazing there is something that you need to improve of i really want you to try and write more above you blogs explaining the challenges and what you liked. Try to go into more detail about what this is and why.
Try asking for feedback and what on.
Keep up the good work!
Kind Regards!
-Maddison.
Hi there Pauline, my name is Abby and I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School. These photos are really cool.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you showed your work and some photos that weren't captions so others can add captions.
For the caption of the first photo, I would put: Space station attacks hotel!!! What would you put?
Next time you could write more about what you had to do and why you chose to blog about this.
What would your caption be for the first photo?
Kind regards,
Abby.