It is awesome to see that you have got the idea - writing clear sentences that include some interesting vocabulary. I really liked your sentence about yoga as you selected fantastic words. You could have said "lola did some yoga" but instead you chose richer words "practised" and"seafront". Lola practised yoga at the seafront gives the reader more detail and sounds far more interesting.
Hi Pauline,
ReplyDeleteIt is awesome to see that you have got the idea - writing clear sentences that include some interesting vocabulary. I really liked your sentence about yoga as you selected fantastic words. You could have said "lola did some yoga" but instead you chose richer words "practised" and"seafront". Lola practised yoga at the seafront gives the reader more detail and sounds far more interesting.
Hi Miss Stone,
DeleteThank you for the positive feedback.
Many thanks,
Pauline.